Are you interested in this story?

Well, I don't think I'm one to judge because I'm Singaporean and may not grasp stories as well as an American or an English person can. I only understood the first paragraph - maybe you could try to simplify the second and third paragraph for poor struggling readers like me. It's possible to overdo a story, you know. However although I don't understand the story, I can still tell it's a beautiful composition. Way to go!